Anyone wanna start a 14gal Biocube? here you go

[nden]

I think you crit me with a wall of text. I'm interested in starting a salt tank so this might be a good read.

 

[Conski]

thats what its there for

 

[DoctaQ]

so, is this like college level?
just, kinda weird i guess, doesnt seem like a college asignment

you know what we havent done for a while, go around the table and everybody says what year we were born

 

[Conski]

hahahaha yup its college level. English Composition

 

[AnnetteG]

just a quick one that caught my eye:
poor = not having much money and/or things
pour = transfer of a solid or liquid into another container

 

[Amphiprion]

Is this a freestyle assignment or does it need to be more along the lines of an essay? If the latter, you need to reformulate it in the third person. The content is good overall, but the form is very unorthodox for a composition in a literature/English class. It would make a good article with some proofreading and polishing, but I would make lots of changes before submitting it to a class (unless it is more of a freestyle or free-writing exercise).

 

[Conski]

Yea its free style writing on an essay form she was happy with the way its written, i asked her for extra time so that i could fix my punctuation and grammar!