Can you please proof-read my website?

I think it is a great start and, like Sting said, the information is presented in an easy to understand way.

First, let me congratulate you on another aspect of your presentation - the often neglected but highly desirous comma. You use it beautifully, which makes sentences much easier to read!

OK, now for my bits......

Under Thermometers. "....these kinds of thermometers are more accurate then the ones..."

- the word should be than

Under Fishless Cycling. You say to use pure ammonia. One question I see here time and again is, "How do I know ammonia is pure?" You might want to add the information about shaking and foaming.

Under Adding Fish and Plants, beforehand is one word.

Under Weekly Maintenance, re water companies adding chlorine. Perhaps add information about chloramine, too.
 
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Site looks great the only thing I found was in the substrate section it say's, {Anaerobic spots form when there is no little or no circulation}

I think what you meant to say was {Anaerobic spots form when there is little or no circulation }

Just remove the first no. Don't forget to let us know when it is all done. niner

Edit you might have meant this also, {Anaerobic spots form when there is too little or no circulation }
 
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Hey.. those are just IDEAS that can make his website "jump out" from the thousand other websites...

One website has created a fish radio program to answer questions.
 
Aquaria Central Link

The site looks good! You may want to spell out Aquaria Central and have it as a clickable link... :)
 
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