The question is, what, if any, concentration of ascorbic acid in water has a negative effect on fish.
Treating water to be released into an existing ecosystem is different because the ascorbic acid will be further diluted by the existing chlorine and chloramine free water. If you are releasing treated water in to a river or pond, the concentration of ascorbic acid becomes neglible nearly instantly. However, in an aquarium, you are not further diluting the vitamin C. You are replacing 50% of the water with the new aqueous ascorbic acid. Assuming the ascorbic acid isn't removed by other means, after a few water changes, you'll begin to maintain a constant level in the tank....and undiluted level.
Again, it may not cause any issues, but the paper doesn't completely apply since it's based on the assumption that the existing aquatic environment will have cloramine-free water to then dilute the treated water.
It's an interesting discussion, but so far there doesn't appear to be any research into how it would effect an aquarium. Without proper analytical testing, I wouldn't trust it in my tank. A crude method would be to test this method in a tank with some cheap feeder fish. Using this method, you would need to cheap the tank existing for a few years, in order to observe any potential chronic effects. Acute effects could be seen quickly, but it if you start shaving months or years off the life of your fish, it would be a problem.
Ideally, testing would start with feeder fish, and work it's way up. In order for this to be an effective DIY tool for the hobby aquarist, you would want to be comfortable that it wouldn't effect more delicate fish, like SA cichlids and Discus.