I liked it. I hope it gets published. Now when Lila becomes famous, we can all say that we read her stuff before she made it big. 
Lila Boffins said:Okay...I've sent the story off. Should hear a rejection within a couple weeks.
I do want to thank all of you who read it and sent me feedback. It was very valuable for my revisions. You're all awesome.
And some good news.
I've got a flash fiction published here:
http://www.demonminds.com/datetales.asp
The story is called Unstable. It's quick.
Enjoy.
Lila
Larissa said:Well, wow. That was pretty good.
msouth468 said:
Whew, I was afraid you just didn't like me anymore.Lila Boffins said:I'm sorry, darling. I'm doing what I'm hoping is the final revision. It's gonna have to be, I'm almost out of time to send it in. When I get it finished, I'll send it to you. In the mean time, send me your email addy again.
*see, told you I wasn't gonna keep them!*
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UncaBret said:Whew, I was afraid you just didn't like me anymore.