Water temperature plays a big part with activating yeast... Too cool and they either never wake up or are very slow to get going. Too warm and they die. I think the desired temp for blooming yeast was 100-110? Just warm to the touch.
Adding less yeast (1/4 teaspoon per 2 cup sugar, 2 cup water) allows a longer discharge of co2. Larger amounts (1/2-1 tsp) and the yeast go crazy, have a huge party, but won't last very long. I used the lesser yeast method in my diy. I had 1-2bps pretty steadily for 10-12 days. This was on a 5 & 10 gallon tank.
For the 55 I'm thinking at least 3-4 2L bottles to be effective. Also, a warning about airstones... Co2 will breakdown the stone. I like using a piece of bamboo chopstick - the gas passes thru the bamboo fibers and the bubbles are very fine. If you want to splurge, a ceramic diffuser can be used with diy co2.
And I don't see a secondary water chamber on your diy setup. By running your line into a second smaller bottle half-filled with water, so the gas bubbles thru the water and then setup another hole/tube in that cap leading to the tank (w/your check valve). This will remove yeast spores from the co2 to help reduce "gunk" aka yeast buildup on your airstone.